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As we are engrossed in computers in every aspect of today’s life (instead of computers are engrossed in every aspect of today’s life),
Rather than depriving them of the answers of their curiosities.
Society should be cautious as well as informed by providing screen time to children.
Don’t ask questions in conclusion. Put your point across and a stick to your opinion and make it clear by summarising your points.
This answer is worthy of a band score of 4.0/6.0