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Introduction: written nicely
BP 1: contacting: communicating with
in real- reality
who lives- live
nearby- in neighborhood
the plethora- a plethora
result- results
therefore, living- therefore, they live
BP 2: on- in front of
due to the – due to lack
leads to negative- may lead to
the judicious- judicious
BAND SCORE: 5/6 Keep it up!
