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  • Anureet

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    July 23, 2021 at 8:32 AM
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    Activity Points 15810

    Introduction: many-some

    qualification- degree

    a better- better

    soft skills are- is

    in the job- for the job

    BP 1: better- redundantly used

    majority- a majority

    the one’s degree- one’s degree

    doctor or teachers- doctors

    For more clarity- unnecessary

    MBBS- an

    BP 2: better- lucrative

    result into- results

    trained- a trained

    For instance- already used in BP 1- substitute take for example

    major- required

    BP 3: communications- communication

    Conclusion: will always- can professionally boost- rephrase our career

    BAND SCORE: 4.5/6 Good work. Keep writing!