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  • Anureet

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    July 23, 2021 at 8:48 AM
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    Introduction- believed- believe

    Paraphrase clearly

    Valuable- important

    BP 1: help- can help in

    Easier- easily

    show- shows

    significant- significance

    Are required- is required

    performing- perform

    courses- companies

    Equip- incorrect word choice

    Prospectice- prospective

    Persuasive- persuasion

    can take you to the position- can help one in becoming a leader

    Working- work

    Conclusion- summarise main points more clearly

    Band Score: 3/6 Keep writing!