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  • Anureet

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    July 23, 2021 at 9:27 AM
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    Introduction: paraphrased only half of the question

    include main points in the thesis statement

    BP 1: teens- teenagers

    boost- boosts

    which- and

    such job- job

    Conclusion- use conclusion liners instead of to summarise

    the conclusion is clearly written

    BAND SCORE: 4.5/6 Good job. Keep writing!