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  • Anureet

    July 23, 2021 at 3:46 PM

    INTRODUCTION: number growth- growth

    obese- obesity

    pleople- people

    lead- led

    would strained- would get strained

    a important- an important

    Although- erroneous complex sentence

    work on paraphrasing and thesis statement

    BP 1: have been- have

    become- became

    especially those- especially for

    BP 2: start- started

    habbit- habit

    and it is a habit- when it becomes a habit

    reduces- it reduces

    put- manage

    Reducing the higher calories of food- lowering the intake of calories

    exercise help- exercise can help

    exercise- exercising

    Conclusion: changing- change

    in to overweight- to become overweight

    activities on daily- activity on a daily

    BAND SCORE: 3/5 Keep writing!

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