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  • Anureet

    July 23, 2021 at 4:20 PM

    INTRODUCTION: It is argues- rephrase it

    finest- most effective

    BP 1: introduced- taught

    teaches- teach

    long life morals- life long moral values

    physical confidence- body positivity

    chronic and severe- write either chronic or severe

    in the adulthood- in adulthood

    BP 2: stress- strain or pressure

    higher- the higher

    correlative comparative is correct- GOOD

    Conclusion- more of exercise- focus on exerise

    BAND SCORE: 4/6. Good. Keep writing!

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