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Introduction: paraphrase the question statement
believes- believe
the evry- every
leads- lead
write a clear thesis statement with main points
BP 1: the people’s – people’s
affinity to- affinity for
at international- at an international
BP 2: lead to disappearance- lead to the disappearance
in it- in them
in the world- of the world
Conclusion: use a conclusion linker
the one- one
groom-grooms
be completely losing- completely lose
summarise the main points clearly
BAND SCORE: 3.5/6 Keep writing!
