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  • Anureet

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    July 26, 2021 at 3:52 PM
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    INTRODUCTION: other- others

    good developing- developing

    soft skills are- soft skills is

    Thesis statement- state main points clearly

    BP 1: individual have- has

    them- him

    bring- brings

    their- his

    BP 2:

    uplift- enhances

    factual- theoretically

    to where- where

    enter directly- start working directly

    in jobs- in different sectors

    give- gives

    for instance- For instance

    continued- continue

    advance their- advance in their

    professional- professional qualification

    filed of doctors and teachers- like in the field of medicine and teaching

    untrained- unskilled person

    Conclusion :

    life a – live a

    will- can

    make balance- make a balance

    to him/her- for him/her

    change- chance

    BAND SCORE: 3/6 Keep writing!