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INTRODUCTION: other- others
good developing- developing
soft skills are- soft skills is
Thesis statement- state main points clearly
BP 1: individual have- has
them- him
bring- brings
their- his
BP 2:
uplift- enhances
factual- theoretically
to where- where
enter directly- start working directly
in jobs- in different sectors
give- gives
for instance- For instance
continued- continue
advance their- advance in their
professional- professional qualification
filed of doctors and teachers- like in the field of medicine and teaching
untrained- unskilled person
Conclusion :
life a – live a
will- can
make balance- make a balance
to him/her- for him/her
change- chance
BAND SCORE: 3/6 Keep writing!
