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Deleted UserJuly 28, 2021 at 10:47 AMIntroduction: paraphrase the question statement
we can see- do not use I or we as its a formal task
Overall- add more key features
by 2010- in 2010
As moving further- Start your sentence from the car parking
staff was it- staff it was
The word limit should be 150+. Add more details
BAND SCORE: 1.5/3 Keep writing!