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INTRODUCTION: paraphrase your question statement without adding any extra information
society responsible- society is responsible
we- don’t include we or I in formal essay writing
The physical education is must- Doing physical education is a must
individual- individuals
leave- live- instead of live write have
enroot- enrooted
Write a thesis statement stating the main points
BP1: cause- causes
World Health Organisation- Don’t quote source while giving an example
The one of the- One of the advanced countries
periods- period
on daily- on a daily
BP2: diseases which- diseases, are creating
CONCLUSION: on above subject-don’t write these phrases
The physical- Physical
The healthy- healthy
lead lower- lower the burden
systems- system
strong nation- make our nation strong.
BAND SCORE:2.5/6 Keep writing!
