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  • Saad

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    July 31, 2021 at 2:24 PM
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    Sakshi, a lot of repetition is found in paragraph 2, and also if you’re quoting statistical data, you need to mention the source also, it makes the writing more impactful. And also work on your punctuations, there are some misuses to be found.