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  • Saad

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    July 31, 2021 at 2:28 PM
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    In the introductory paragraph, the syntax, grammar and punctuations are wrong, you shouldn’t use sentences like “since obesity is main”, etc. Overall, work on your punctuation errors and also recognise the syntax of your essay by reading it thoroughly.

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