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  • Saad

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    July 31, 2021 at 2:48 PM

    Giving a personal example is high relativeness but you should use better devices to represent it, for eg- ‘Personally’, ‘In my opinion’, etc. Otherwise the essay is concise and touches upon almost all aspects of the aforementioned subject.

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