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  • Saad

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    July 31, 2021 at 2:53 PM

    ‘Nowadays’ is one word.

    Mostly in english language essays, avoid using ‘&’ or any other shortcuts for a word. The coherence between paragraph 2 and 3 is good and is well-structured.

    Work more on the conclusion and the choice of your words.

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