AnureetMemberAugust 2, 2021 at 12:58 PM
OPENING STATEMENT: for me- unnecessary
to be temporarily transferred- to transfer temporarily
BP1: for newer- on latest
BP2: the same as before: the same way as before
BP3: would be benefitted- would benefit
Yours sincerely- this is a semi-formal letter. Hence, end with Regards
BAND SCORE: 2/3 Keep Writing!