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INTRODUCTION :recycled to the fullest- recycled completely
favoured by some people- according to some people
BP1: who’ll- who will- contractions are not allowed in Formal writing
Clearly written
BP2:
their- there
refer to that- which they can refer to
wasteable- wastage of water
come- made some
BP2: don’t mention the source of the survey
a specific areas- some specific areas
earlier not giving any contributing- people earlier did not contribute in recycling the waste of their home
aware about- aware of
campus- camps
result- resulted
CONCLUSION: impose- imposes
strickly- spelling mistake- strictly
actions- action
makes- makers
BAND SCORE: 3.5/6 Keep writing!
