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  • Anureet

    August 3, 2021 at 3:45 PM

    Introduction- Paraphrase question statement clearly

    shares a major contribution- contributes greatly to happiness

    Cash- money

    Promote- promotes

    BP1: To emabark on- on the one hand

    The state- a state

    Never feel- would never feel

    BP2: As moving further- On the other hand

    makes people cherish- can make people happy

    As the reason behind, is that- comma is incorrectly used – Start with The reason behind this is that

    The another- another

    Conclusion- Family pillar- supportive family

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