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humans life as well as in educational field- write main points in your thesis statement
BP1: learn and discover- learnt and discovered
moderated- had an impact on
not any- no
by the development in- with the development of
human- humans
at any- any
save- saves
BP 2: for cuisine- in terms of food
provides the- can provide him
What I want to say is- don’t write such statements in formal essay writing
want- wants
in past time- in the past
interact- interacted
BP2: we- don’t write I or we in BPs
Conclusion- traveling- travelling
select- options
which help them- which can help
them- him
with any hustle and tassel- incorrect- without any difficulty
