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  • NIL Admin

    Administrator
    August 6, 2021 at 6:49 PM

    You have done an excellent job for the first time. The structure is good enough and you have used enough good words.

    There are a few grammatical errors noted but nothing major.

    However I would like you to pay attention to your conclusion. Never make suggestions in conclusion or start a new point.

    Band Score: 4.0/6.0

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