AnureetMemberAugust 9, 2021 at 10:42 AM
OPENING STATEMENT: which I found in- posted in the Times magazine
Add more details in your BPs like:
BP1: passionately want to explore child care practitioner opportunities overseas
BP2: qualities suitable for the post of nanny such as empathy, patience etc. Certification along with relevant experience and what you did in that role
BP3: state different ways of spending time in Australia: explore exotic locations, enroll in a course etc.
BAND SCORE: 1.5/3 Keep Writing!