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  • Anureet

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    August 9, 2021 at 11:53 AM

    INTRODUCTION: don’t add extra information in your paraphrased statement

    write main points in your thesis statement

    BP1: advantages for- advantages to

    do not include we in Formal Essay writing

    BP2: that fact- the fact

    choices overload- an overload of choices

    decide for- decide

    Conclusion: summarise the main points clearly

    BAND SCORE: 3/6 Keep Writing!

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