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Opening Statement- a awesome- an awesome
BP1: for making an elated holiday experience to Thailand- rephrase
BP2: to my bad- not required
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Opening Statement- a awesome- an awesome
BP1: for making an elated holiday experience to Thailand- rephrase
BP2: to my bad- not required
Add more details in all your body paragraphs
Band Score: 1.5/3 Keep Writing!
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