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  • Anureet

    August 13, 2021 at 3:49 PM

    INTRODUCTION: World- world

    paraphrase more clearly

    BP1: Technology- technology

    Globalization- globalization

    the online shopping- the domain of online shopping

    has actually- have actually

    BP3: Government: government

    Conclusion: don’t write overall- start with conclusion linkers

    BAND SCORE: 3/6 Keep Writing!

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