Feedback : The essay is off the track , question is not asking which schools provide better facilities rather right time to learn a foreign language.
work on structure of essay, state your stand in the introduction as question demands “do advantages outweigh disadvantages”
Grammar accuracy , use of synonyms , sentence structures need to be practiced.
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