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OPENING STATEMENT: Hope- I hope
BP 1: my heart wishes- rephrase it
masterful- substitute a word related to dishes- you can use mouthwatering
BP 2: in my hurry- in a hurry
in which- rephrase it
BAND SCORE: 2/3 Keep Writing!
OPENING STATEMENT: Hope- I hope
BP 1: my heart wishes- rephrase it
masterful- substitute a word related to dishes- you can use mouthwatering
BP 2: in my hurry- in a hurry
in which- rephrase it
BAND SCORE: 2/3 Keep Writing!
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