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  • Anureet

    August 17, 2021 at 9:10 AM

    OPENING STATEMENT: Rewrite it more clearly

    BP2: On another aspect- On the other hand

    for the people: for people

    the people- people

    making- it will make

    BP 3: most need- need

    BAND SCORE: 2/3 Keep Writing!

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