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OPENING STATEMENT: which I – where I- rephrase your opening statement for clarity
BP 1: Actually- tone is informal
recruiting- recruitment of
BP 2: on regular: on a regular
Language and tone need to be more formal
BAND SCORE: 1.5/3 Keep Writing!
OPENING STATEMENT: which I – where I- rephrase your opening statement for clarity
BP 1: Actually- tone is informal
recruiting- recruitment of
BP 2: on regular: on a regular
Language and tone need to be more formal
BAND SCORE: 1.5/3 Keep Writing!
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