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  • Anureet

    August 20, 2021 at 9:03 AM

    OPENING STATEMENT: which I – where I- rephrase your opening statement for clarity

    BP 1: Actually- tone is informal

    recruiting- recruitment of

    BP 2: on regular: on a regular

    Language and tone need to be more formal

    BAND SCORE: 1.5/3 Keep Writing!

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