My grandfather had gifted me an antique watch on my 18th birthday and you are also very fascinated when I had shown the same to you..(Quite a long time ago should be in past perfect)
When I reached my home.(Perfect sentence is not needed here)
Grammatical range needs to improve, other than that maintain grammatical accuracy.
Band Score: 1.5/3.0
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