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  • Falak

    August 27, 2021 at 5:39 PM

    Body Paragraph 1 : To elaborate (more), more is redundant here.

    Climate can be drastically impacted if there will be a flood (Agricultural sector can be impacted adversely with intensive climatic changes)

    poor harvesting makes farmers (peasantry) more ( comparative form of poor is poorer ; not more poorer) poorer (helpless) and less demand in products (great loss in crop yields)

    In short (apparently) , such things is (are) not under control

    Body paragraph 2 : Not convinced with content related to MNC

    Conclusion : Try to state the argument completely , followed by your opinion

    Feedback : Need to work on sentence structure.

    band : 3/6

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