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Excellently written. Structure is on point and lexical resources are used beautifully. Coherence and cohesion is maintained but still can be improved by including a few more cohesive devices.
One example is missing in the first body paragraph which is the only thing hurting your score.
One example is missing in the first body paragraph which is the only thing hurting your score.
Band score weightage: 5.0/6.0
