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Overall- Lacks key features. Write after introduction.
BP1: gone undergoes- undergoes
BP2: in a intricate- in an intricate
Band Score: 1.5/3 Keep Writing!
Overall- Lacks key features. Write after introduction.
BP1: gone undergoes- undergoes
BP2: in a intricate- in an intricate
Band Score: 1.5/3 Keep Writing!
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