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Deleted UserSeptember 3, 2021 at 9:59 AMIntroduction- paraphrase your question statement without adding anything extra
Write a clear thesis statement incorporating your main points
BP1: their infrastructure- its infrastructure
The new tracks- new tracks
You have to state a clear position explaining to what extent you agree.
Article The is incorrectly used in the body paragraphs.
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