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The given line graph illustrates the theft per thousand cars in Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada for a time period between 1990 to 1999. Car theft in Sweden increased over the given time frame while the number of thefts remained (almost) same throughout Canada, Great Britain and France depicting slight fluctuations.
Thefts in Sweden were around 8000 (8) in the early years of the given time (period). In the year 1991 Sweden and France had the same number of cases occurring. Sweden reached its highest point (over 13000) (over 13) by the end of the year 1999.
Great Britain has topped the list by maintaining a higher (highest) range of theft thought the entire time (period). It had fluctuated heavily thought the period. Theft here was over 17000 (17), which was almost the same during the start and the end. The Sweden’s highest recorded count was almost 4000 (4) thefts lower to that of Great Britain. France maintained it’s (its) count around 5400 ( wrong data )while Canada fluctuated around 6000.
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Please rewrite the answer as the data deciphered from the chart is incorrect. The answer is not up to the mark with ample of mistakes in tenses/ pronouns/ and comparatives.
