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  • Falak

    September 10, 2021 at 11:08 AM

    I saw my hair turn (turned) red

    I don’t (didn’t) even know when I fall (fell) asleep.

    I was dejected, and don’t (didn’t/ was clueless ) know what to do

    I saw everybody was having red hair,(in/ some connection is required here) park near to my house.

    then I turn (turned) my head,

    even all buildings are (were) in red colour.

    the whole city turns (turned) red

    Feedback : make accurate use of tenses.

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