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  • Anureet

    September 11, 2021 at 9:22 AM

    INTRODUCTION: folks- informal

    this lead- this will lead

    just paraphrase and write a thesis statement in your introduction. Add details in your body paragraphs

    BP 1: Since- since

    household accessories- collocation mistake- household items

    that very- is very

    lost- loose

    recent last month- recently published article

    Of- of

    Don’t mention the source name in your example

    BP 2: owned- own

    not holds- don’t hold

    CONCLUSION: Thus, we can conclude that- Inconclusion

    needs of products- essentials

    the people- people

    has been- have been

    sad thing- informal

    BAND SCORE: 3/6 Keep Writing!

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