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Written beautifully Harsaroop.. It follows the structure appropriately and there is a logical flow in your writing. You did try to use some lexical resource provided in the class. You have done a tremendous job in your first attempt here.
There are 2-3 grammatical errors, nothing major however range can be improved and worked upon. Conclusion became a little bit longer than required.
Band score weightage 3.5/6.0
