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INTRODUCTION: paraphrase clearly without adding extra information
impact in- impact on
BP 1: believed- believe
in Instagram- on Instagram- take care of proper nouns
got happened- happened
don’t quote personal examples
BP 2: harmful to- harmful for
at currently- currently
the speedy- speedy
the great- a great
in live- on live
impacts- impact
the good- a good
CONCLUSION: demerits impacts- rephrase
BAND SCORE: 2.5/6 Keep Writing! Work on your grammar.
