AbhinavAdministratorSeptember 17, 2021 at 9:12 PM
On one hand, no need of article
Could use a little more grammatical range. However that is sufficient to give you a good score.
Task achievement complete
Grammatical accuracy good
Lexical resources are utilised properly in relevant places
Coherence and cohesion can be improved by incorporating more cohesive devices in conjunctions.
Band score a weightage: 5.0/6.0