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Undoubtedly, people are changing their preferences about reading and are drifting towards using online books that are available on their electronic devices (without having to carry books) carrying paper-back with them every time. It is being argued that conventional newspapers and magazines are fully replaceable by the modern era trend of reading them digitally. I disagree with the fact that daily paper and journals will ever (get)replace ( replaced) by electronic books completely.
First and foremost, daily newsprint and publications do not have any detrimental effect on health and are favourable for all age groups. People prefer to read the hard copies because they find it easy and comfortable rather than reading them on electronic devices. For example, in many countries, people are still habitual of reading daily newspapers first thing in the morning, and no change has been observed in their daily habit.
Alternatively, books available in cyberspace can be downloaded directly on one’s gadgets, and one can read them at their(one’s) convenience. Though they are handy and are easily available on the internet, it has its repercussions. For instance, research has shown that more than four hours of screen time has a damaging effect on the eyes, and hence, it is not advisable for young children and old age people to use it in their day-to-day life.
To conclude, although digital books and magazines are available by just clicking on a modern technological device, conventional newspapers and journals are best suited for all age groups as they have no hazard to their health. I certainly believe that e-books would never end the tradition of daily newspapers and magazines.
Observations:
Please see the corrections above in bold.
1. carrying paper-back- without having to carry books.
Paper-back is not a synonym of books.
2. will ever (get)replace ( replaced) by
3. One will always take one’s and not ‘their’
Feedback:
Except a few sentence framing and Grammar errors the rest of the essay is ok. Though, it is advisable that while using uncommon vocabulary words please ensure the right use of the word.
Band Score: 4/6
