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    September 19, 2021 at 2:43 PM

    With rise in technological advancement, life has changed in many ways, from printed materials to e books. Few people believe that this advancement in near future will completely change the traditional ways of functioning of media and entertainment industry. This essay will partially agree with the given statement.

    To begin with, it is obvious that the speed with which people are adopting new technology is not only because it is convenient, but also because it is making their lives easier in millions of ways. For instance, many schools and universities have started encouraging their students to use tablets and laptops in classrooms. This has definitely decreased the burden of carrying number of books and assignments to school and college on a regular basis. In addition to that, educational facilities and even students are able to save loads of money, as they can access and download variety of content from internet in form e books, so they do not end up spending their money on books with limited content.

    However, a small part of world still prefers published material over e books and articles. No matter how advance and robust the technology gets, great writers still like to read the content and story directly from the books.

    To conclude, in future, the rising tide of technology will certainly change the current media industry, but still the traditional ways of delivering news, information and different types of content will coexist.

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    All parts of the task are sufficiently and appropriately addressed. A clear position is presented and supported and ideas are relevant and well developed. There is a clear progression throughout the response and a wide range of cohesive devices is used with flexibility. A wide range of vocabulary is used with flexibility and precision. Minor errors or omissions occur in structures, but these do not detract from the wide range flexibly and accurately used generally, and the majority of structures are error-free.

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