AnureetMemberSeptember 20, 2021 at 12:14 PM
INTRODUCTION: Whereas- don’t start your sentence with whereas as it’s a continuation of your previous sentence. Include it with the previous sentence
BP 1: big picture overview- write either big picture or overview
that would later- that they would later
BP 2: is got- is obtained
BAND SCORE: 3.5/6 Keep Writing!