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Deleted UserSeptember 21, 2021 at 1:54 PMIntroduction: attracting- attracted
beneficial- be beneficial
BP1: attract to it- get attracted to it
gives- has
BP2: prone their body- makes their body prone
deceases- not required
BP 3: causes- is caused
doing- do
for becoming- of becoming
become a key- rephrase
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