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  • Anureet

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    September 21, 2021 at 1:54 PM
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    Introduction: attracting- attracted

    beneficial- be beneficial

    BP1: attract to it- get attracted to it

    gives- has

    BP2: prone their body- makes their body prone

    deceases- not required

    BP 3: causes- is caused

    doing- do

    for becoming- of becoming

    become a key- rephrase

    Band Score: 2.5/6 Keep Writing!

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