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Deleted UserSeptember 21, 2021 at 2:02 PMIntroduction: resulted the English language as one of- rephrase more clearly
BP 1: empathize on- empathize with
Moreover, Single- Moreover, single
Bp 2: Drawback- drawback
Conclusion: a efficient- an efficient
Don’t write you or I in body paragraphs
Work on punctuation and grammatical mistakes
Band Score: 3/6 Keep Writing!