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  • Anureet

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    September 21, 2021 at 2:02 PM
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    Introduction: resulted the English language as one of- rephrase more clearly

    BP 1: empathize on- empathize with

    Moreover, Single- Moreover, single

    Bp 2: Drawback- drawback

    Conclusion: a efficient- an efficient

    Don’t write you or I in body paragraphs

    Work on punctuation and grammatical mistakes

    Band Score: 3/6 Keep Writing!

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