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in the forthcoming paragraph(s)
extra-academic subjects is (are)
and reach to saturation level ( become unreceptive to new learnings)
foster ( incorrect usage) ; foster means to encourage
they can foster ( grasp)
from studying majors/specializations (choose either )
To elaborate, (this means that (redundant))
salary packages and abroad opportunities, since the success rate is comparatively low in creative skills
Feedback : be careful with ” subject-verb” agreement
Band : 3.5/6
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