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  • Falak

    September 21, 2021 at 2:57 PM
    400 Network Points
    Activity Points 14510

    in the forthcoming paragraph(s)

    extra-academic subjects is (are)

    and reach to saturation level ( become unreceptive to new learnings)

    foster ( incorrect usage) ; foster means to encourage

    they can foster ( grasp)

    from studying majors/specializations (choose either )

    To elaborate, (this means that (redundant))

    salary packages and abroad opportunities, since the success rate is comparatively low in creative skills

    Feedback : be careful with ” subject-verb” agreement

    Band : 3.5/6

    keep writing!

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