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  • Anureet

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    September 22, 2021 at 9:11 AM
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    Write a clear thesis statement incorporating the main points

    BP1: individual- individual’s

    BP 2: more focus- focus more

    Conclusion- have more- having more

    go- going

    all- every

    working- work

    Band Score: 4/6 Keep Writing!

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