Thesis statement is missing in introduction.
Excellent structure. Task achievement is hundred percent. Good use of lexical resources. You have made a very good effort to make it grammatically accurate.
The other side of the fact is that supermarkets are also crucial because we get expansive collection of items under a single roof.
Band score weightage: 4.5/6.0
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