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  • Anureet

    September 29, 2021 at 8:54 AM

    Introduction- an interest- interest

    the benefit for the health- its us beneficial for health

    Thesis statement should include main points

    BP1: becomes- has become

    Conclusion- the health- health

    it is it can- it can

    be staying- stay

    Band Score: 3/6 Keep Writing!

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