AbhinavAdministratorSeptember 29, 2021 at 10:08 PM
The word cognitive is not used in correct context. Should have made a different sentence or use a different word.
This indirectly forsakes a requirement
This is a pretty good essay. Tried to use a lot of good words. Coherence in cohesion is also good enough. Try not to make these simple grammatical errors next time.
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