AdministratorOctober 5, 2021 at 9:46 AM280 Network PointsActivity Points 6690
Social media platform(s) have
have witnessed tremonous (tremendous)
in person communication over( over is redundant here) within communities
i (I) concede
I suppose the changes have been beneficial (However, I believe that the benefits this shift brings may overshadow the drawbacks).
B.P 1 : Topic sentence needs to be more precise an so the explanation.
Band : 2.5/6